fix: CLI command text review

messages/lightning.preview.app.md

@@ -1,21 +1,19 @@
 # summary
 
-Preview Lightning Experience Applications.
+Preview a Lightning Experience application locally and in real-time, without deploying it.
 
 # description
 
-Preview Lightning Experience Applications in real-time.
+With developer preview mode, see local changes to your app in a real-time preview that you don't have to deploy or manually refresh. To let you quickly iterate on your Lightning web components (LWCs) and pages, your app preview automatically refreshes when source code changes are detected.
 
-In dev preview mode, you can edit local files and see these changes to your Lightning Web Components (LWC) within your {org name} org:
+When you edit local files in developer preview mode, your LWCs reflect these changes within your {org name} org:
 
 - Basic HTML and CSS edits
-- Importing new CSS-only LWC
+- Importing new CSS-only LWCs
 - JS edits in-service component library
-- JS method changes in the LWC component that don't alter its public API.
+- JS method changes that don't affect the LWC's public API
 
-Other local changes require deployment to your org. However, changes made directly in your org (like modifying component properties and saving) are immediately live and won't show in your local files until you retrieve them from the org.
-
-This feature enables developers to quickly iterate on their components and pages, seeing the impact of changes in real-time without needing to deploy or refresh manually. Live reload is enabled by default to automatically refresh the preview when source code changes are detected.
+To see any other local changes in your app, you have to deploy to your org. If you make changes directly in your org (e.g., saving new component properties,) they're immediately live on your app. To update your local version of the app with those changes, you have to retrieve them from your org.
 
 Use the appropriate topic to preview specific aspects of the development environment.
 
@@ -29,11 +27,11 @@ Username or alias of the target org. Not required if the `target-org` configurat
 
 # flags.device-type.summary
 
-Type of device to emulate in preview.
+Type of device to emulate in the preview.
 
 # flags.device-id.summary
 
-For mobile virtual devices, specify the device ID to preview. If omitted, the first available virtual device will be used.
+ID of the mobile device to emulate the preview when device type is set to `mobile`. The default value is the ID of the first available mobile device.
 
 # error.fetching.app-id
 
@@ -71,74 +69,79 @@ Downloading
 
 # certificate.installation.description
 
-If you have not done so already, please install the self-signed certificate on your device before proceeding. The certificate file is located at
+Before proceeding, make sure you installed the self-signed certificate on your device. The certificate file is located at
 
 `%s`
 
-Follow the steps below to install the certificate:
+To install the certificate, follow these steps:
 
 %s
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.ios
 
-1. Drag and drop the file on to your booted simulator.
-2. Tap `Allow` to proceed with downloading the configuration file.
-3. Tap `Close` and navigate to `Settings > General > VPN & Device Management > localhost`.
-4. Tap `Install` in the title bar, in the warning window, and on the install button.
-5. In the `Profile Installed` view, confirm that the profile shows as `Verified` and Tap `Done`.
-6. Now navigate to `Settings > General > About > Certificate Trust Settings`.
-7. Toggle full trust for `localhost` to enable full trust.
-8. In the warning dialog, tap `Continue`.
+1. Drag and drop the file onto your booted simulator.
+2. Click `Allow` to proceed with downloading the configuration file.
+3. Click `Close` and navigate to `Settings > General > VPN & Device Management > localhost`.
+4. Click `Install` in the title bar, in the warning window, and on the install button.
+5. In the `Profile Installed` view, confirm that the profile displays `Verified` and then click `Done`.
+6. Navigate to `Settings > General > About > Certificate Trust Settings`.
+7. Enable full trust for `localhost`.
+8. In the resulting warning pop-up, click `Continue`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android
 
-1. Drag and drop the file on to your booted emulator.
+1. Drag and drop the file onto your booted emulator.
 2. %s
-3. Browse to the certificate file that you transferred from step 1 (usually under `/sdcard/download`).
+3. Navigate to the certificate file from step 1. (It's usually located in `/sdcard/download`).
 4. Follow the on-screen instructions to install it.
-5. Tap on `User credentials` under `Credential storage` and verify that your certificate is listed there.
-6. Tap on `Trusted credentials` under `Credential storage`. Then tap on `USER` and verify that your certificate is listed there.
+5. Click `User credentials` under `Credential storage` and verify that your certificate is listed there.
+6. Click `Trusted credentials` under `Credential storage`. Then click `USER` and verify that page lists your certificate.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-24-25
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security` and tap on `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security` and click `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-26-27
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security & Location > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security & Location > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-28
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security & Location > Advanced > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security & Location > Advanced > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-29
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install from SD card` under `Credential storage`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-30-32
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Now tap on `CA certificate` and on `Install anyway`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Click `CA certificate`, and then click `Install anyway`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-33
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security > More security settings > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Now tap on `CA certificate` and on `Install anyway`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security > More security settings > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Click `CA certificate`, and then click `Install anyway`.
 
 # certificate.installation.steps.android.nav-target-api-34-up
 
-Navigate to `Settings > Security & Privacy > More security & privacy > Encryption & credentials` and tap on `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Now tap on `CA certificate` and on `Install anyway`.
+Navigate to `Settings > Security & Privacy > More security & privacy > Encryption & credentials` and click `Install a certificate` under `Credential storage`. Click `CA certificate`, and then click `Install anyway`.
 
 # certificate.waiting
 
-After installing the certificate, press any key to continue...
+After you install certificate, press any key to continue...
 
 # mobileapp.notfound
 
-%s is not installed on your device.
+%s isn't installed on your device.
 
 # mobileapp.download
 
-%s is not installed on your device. Do you want to download and install it
+%s isn't installed on your device. Do you want to download and install it?
 
 # examples
 
-- <%= config.bin %> <%= command.id %>
+- Preview the target org "myOrg" in a desktop environment.
+  <%= config.bin %> <%= command.id %> --target-org myOrg
+- Preview the application "myApp" for the target org "myOrg" in a desktop environment:
+  <%= config.bin %> <%= command.id %> --name MyApp --target-org myOrg --device-type desktop
+- Preview the target org "myOrg" on an iOS device:
+  <%= config.bin %> <%= command.id %> --target-org myOrg --device-type ios --device-id "37C98F87-63C4"

package.json

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
         "external": true,
         "subtopics": {
           "preview": {
-            "description": "Preview components, applications, and sites locally without deploy."
+            "description": "Preview applications and sites locally and in real-time, without deploying them."
           }
         }
       }