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6 changes: 3 additions & 3 deletions draft-ietf-quic-qlog-h3-events.md
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# HTTP/3 Events {#h3-ev}

HTTP/3 events extend the `$ProtocolEventData` extension point defined in
{{QLOG-MAIN}}. Additionally, they allow for direct extensibility by their use of
{{Section 8.2 of QLOG-MAIN}}. Additionally, they allow for direct extensibility by their use of
per-event extension points via the `$$` CDDL "group socket" syntax, as also
described in {{QLOG-MAIN}}.
described in {{Section 8.2 of QLOG-MAIN}}.

~~~ cddl
HTTP3EventData = HTTP3ParametersSet /
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# Security and Privacy Considerations

The security and privacy considerations discussed in {{QLOG-MAIN}} apply to this
The security and privacy considerations discussed in {{Section 14 of QLOG-MAIN}} apply to this
document as well.

# IANA Considerations
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QUIC packets always include an AEAD authentication tag at the end. In general,
the length of the AEAD tag depends on the TLS cipher suite, although all cipher
suites used in QUIC v1 use a 16 byte tag. For the purposes of calculating the
lengths in fields of type RawInfo (as defined in {{QLOG-MAIN}}) related to QUIC
lengths in fields of type RawInfo (as defined in {{Section 10 of QLOG-MAIN}}) related to QUIC
packets, the AEAD tag is regarded as a trailer.

## Events not belonging to a single connection {#handling-unknown-connections}
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{: #quic-events title="QUIC Events"}

QUIC events extend the `$ProtocolEventData` extension point defined in
{{QLOG-MAIN}}. Additionally, they allow for direct extensibility by their use of
{{Section 8.2 of QLOG-MAIN}}. Additionally, they allow for direct extensibility by their use of
per-event extension points via the `$$` CDDL "group socket" syntax, as also
described in {{QLOG-MAIN}}.
described in {{Section 8.2 of QLOG-MAIN}}.

~~~ cddl
QuicEventData = QUICServerListening /
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This event is used to associate a single PathID's value with other parameters
that describe a unique network path.

As described in {{QLOG-MAIN}}, each qlog event can be linked to a single network
As described in {{Section 7.2 of QLOG-MAIN}}, each qlog event can be linked to a single network
path by means of the top-level "path" field, whose value is a PathID. However,
since it can be cumbersome to encode additional path metadata (such as IP
addresses or Connection IDs) directly into the PathID, this event allows such an
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# Security and Privacy Considerations

The security and privacy considerations discussed in {{QLOG-MAIN}} apply to this
The security and privacy considerations discussed in {{Section 14 of QLOG-MAIN}} apply to this
document as well.

# IANA Considerations
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