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[jaypolansky1]

Proposed changes

Problem: The page contained many long sentences and clauses that could be simplified to enhance readability.

Solution: I split up longer sentences into smaller sentences, and I also changed a list separated by commas into bullet points.

Testing: N/A

Please focus on (optional): I focused my edits on the top portion of the document except for the bullet point section toward the end of the document.

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Closes #361

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Thanks so much for your contributions!

While we're at the conference, I'd love to chat about this PR. We're doing an unconference session tomorrow (Tuesday) at 8:30 am

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Thanks so much for your contributions!

While we're at the conference, I'd love to chat about this PR. We're doing an unconference session tomorrow (Tuesday) at 8:30 am

Of course! It was a pleasure and a great opportunity to learn a bit about Git!

I would love to chat about this PR. I will likely not be able to make the unconference session. Would it be ok if I found you sometime throughout the day and potentially coordinate through Slack?

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Hi @mjang! I am heading over to Revolution Hall in a few. Are you in the library where the unconference sessions are?