Incorporate @davidlehn suggestions.

Co-authored-by: David I. Lehn <dlehn@digitalbazaar.com>

Author: BigBlueHat

ack-script/acknowledgements.html

@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ <h3>In Memoriam</h3>
     <p>Gregg Kellogg was a central figure in the story of JSON-LD. He worked
     tirelessly on JSON-LD and many other specifications for more than a decade, right up until his death on September 6th, 2025.
     Gregg’s passion for solving hard problems with finesse was only exceeded by
-    his willingness to work with and encourage others toward reaching that destination. The
-    JSON-LD and greater Linked Data communities will be forever grateful for Gregg’s consistent, careful,
-    and kindly delivered contributions through their most formative
-    days.</p>
+    his willingness to collaborate with and encourage others in reaching that destination. The
+    JSON-LD and broader Linked Data communities will be forever grateful for Gregg’s consistent, careful,
+    and kindly delivered contributions during their most formative
+    years.</p>
 
     <h3>Contributions</h3>
     <p>