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 As an Intune administrator, use these compliance settings to help protect your organizational resources. To learn more about compliance policies, and what they do, see [get started with device compliance](device-compliance-get-started.md).  
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> For Android Dedicated scenarios, Android compliance policies should only be targeted at groups of devices, not users. Compliance policies will be evaluated against the device and will appropriately reflect the compliance state in Intune. To allow users on dedicated devices to sign-in to resources protected by Conditional Access policies, consider using Android Enterprise dedicated devices with [*Microsoft Entra shared device mode*](../enrollment/android-kiosk-enroll.md). For other Android Enterprise scenarios like Personally Owned with Work profile, Fully Managed Or Corporate Owned with Work profile enrollments compliance policies can be targeted to user or device groups.
+> It's important to target compliance policies for dedicated devices at groups of devices, not users. Compliance policies will be evaluated against the device and will appropriately reflect the compliance state in Intune. To allow users on dedicated devices to sign in to resources protected by Conditional Access policies, consider using Android Enterprise dedicated devices with [*Microsoft Entra shared device mode*](../enrollment/android-kiosk-enroll.md). In scenarios with fully managed devices, or personal and corporate-owned work profiles, you can target compliance policies at groups of users or devices.  
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-> On Android Enterprise dedicated devices that are enrolled without Microsoft Entra shared device mode, users of the device will be unable to sign into resources protected by Conditional Access policies, even if the device is compliant in Intune. To learn  more about shared device mode, see [*Overview of shared device mode*](/azure/active-directory/develop/msal-shared-devices) in the Microsoft Entra documentation.
+> Users on dedicated devices enrolled without Microsoft Entra shared device mode can't sign into resources protected by Conditional Access policies, even if the device is compliant in Intune. To learn  more about shared device mode, see [*Overview of shared device mode*](/azure/active-directory/develop/msal-shared-devices) in the Microsoft Entra documentation.  
 
 <!-- Compliance policies also apply Android Enterprise dedicated devices. If a compliance policy is assigned to a dedicated device, the device may show as **Not compliant**. Conditional Access and enforcing compliance isn't available on dedicated devices. Be sure to complete any tasks or actions to get dedicated devices compliant with your assigned policies.  -->