Concepts to include / expand on

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Parallel structure

Tutorial formula:

1. Give a heads up: "Now we'll add gravity to our game."
2. Give the code.
3. Explain the code: "Here, we set the gravity acceleration to 1800 pixels per second. The higher the number you assign to gravity, the harder it is for your sprite to jump high."

Tips for titles

• Avoid using "tutorial" in a title:
  x Tutorial for gravity game objects with Kaboom
  o How to add gravity to game objects in Kaboom
• Keep titles clear, active, simple

Tips for self-editing

• Read aloud
• Review gerunds - this is not a hard-and-fast rule, but you can often rewrite gerunds in the infinitive:
  x "We would then be adding the shape, outline, and position feature."
  o "Next we'll add the shape, outline, and position features."

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