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Author: cmilesb

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-Select **Version upgrade** to request to upgrade your subscription and databases (*Redis 7.2 and earlier only*).
+Select **Version upgrade** to request to upgrade your subscription and databases if there is a later version available.
 
 {{<image filename="images/rc/button-version-upgrade.png" width=150px alt="Version upgrade button." >}}
 
 Select the version to upgrade your databases from the list and select **Upgrade** to submit the upgrade request.
 
 {{<image filename="images/rc/version-upgrade-request.png" width=80% alt="Version upgrade request list with version 7.4 selected." >}}
 
-The upgrade will start one week from your request, according to [maintenance windows]({{< relref "/operate/rc/subscriptions/maintenance/set-maintenance-windows" >}}). 
+The upgrade will start one week from your request, according to your subscription's [maintenance windows]({{< relref "/operate/rc/subscriptions/maintenance/set-maintenance-windows" >}}). 
 
 Review the [7.2 breaking changes]({{< relref "/operate/rc/changelog/2023/june-2023#redis-72-breaking-changes" >}}) or [7.4 breaking changes]({{< relref "/operate/rc/changelog/july-2024#redis-74-breaking-changes" >}}) before you request to upgrade.