Update content/operate/rc/subscriptions/bring-your-own-cloud/_index.md

Author: cmilesb

content/operate/rc/subscriptions/bring-your-own-cloud/_index.md

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 - rc
 description: Describes how to provision your Redis Cloud subscription to use an existing
   cloud provider account.
-bannerText: This article is for Redis Cloud Bring your Own Cloud (BYOC). If you're interested in Redis Cloud BYOC, [contact sales](https://redis.io/meeting/).
+bannerText: This article covers Redis Cloud Bring your Own Cloud (BYOC) deployments. To learn more or get started with Redis Cloud BYOC, [contact sales](https://redis.io/meeting/).
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