RS: Clarify upgrade paths note in release notes (#512)

* DOC-4030 RS: Clarify upgrade paths note in release notes

* DOC-4030 Feedback update to simplify upgrade path notes

Author: rrelledge

content/operate/rs/release-notes/rs-7-4-2-releases/_index.md

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ The end-of-life policy for Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2 and later has
 
 #### Supported upgrade paths
 
-After August 31, 2024, Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.4 and 6.2.8 will not be included in [supported upgrade paths]({{<relref "/operate/rs/installing-upgrading/upgrading/upgrade-cluster#supported-upgrade-paths">}}) for Redis Enterprise Software versions beyond 7.4.x. Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.10, 6.2.12, and 6.2.18 will continue to be part of the upgrade path.
+Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.4 and 6.2.8 do not support direct upgrades beyond version 7.4.x. Versions 6.2.10, 6.2.12, and 6.2.18 are part of the [upgrade path]({{<relref "/operate/rs/installing-upgrading/upgrading/upgrade-cluster#supported-upgrade-paths">}}). To upgrade from 6.2.4 or 6.2.8 to versions later than 7.4.x, an intermediate upgrade is required.
 
 The next major Redis Enterprise Software release will still bundle Redis database version 6.2 and allow database upgrades from Redis database version 6.2 to 7.x.
 

content/operate/rs/release-notes/rs-7-4-2-releases/rs-7-4-6-22.md

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ The end-of-life policy for Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2 and later has
 
 #### Supported upgrade paths
 
-After August 31, 2024, Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.4 and 6.2.8 will not be included in [supported upgrade paths]({{<relref "/operate/rs/installing-upgrading/upgrading/upgrade-cluster#supported-upgrade-paths">}}) for Redis Enterprise Software versions beyond 7.4.x. Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.10, 6.2.12, and 6.2.18 will continue to be part of the upgrade path.
+Redis Enterprise Software versions 6.2.4 and 6.2.8 do not support direct upgrades beyond version 7.4.x. Versions 6.2.10, 6.2.12, and 6.2.18 are part of the [upgrade path]({{<relref "/operate/rs/installing-upgrading/upgrading/upgrade-cluster#supported-upgrade-paths">}}). To upgrade from 6.2.4 or 6.2.8 to versions later than 7.4.x, an intermediate upgrade is required.
 
 The next major Redis Enterprise Software release will still bundle Redis database version 6.2 and allow database upgrades from Redis database version 6.2 to 7.x.