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architecture/architecture.adoc

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[[observability-architecture]]

modules/cloud_installations.adoc

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* Cluster registration, which associates the cluster identity to your Red Hat
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In {product-title} version 4.0, the installer is a Go binary that performs a
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In {product-title} v4, the installer is a Go binary that performs a
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series of file transformations on a set of assets. With the fully-managed option,
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you delegate the infrastructure bootstrapping and provisioning to the installer
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instead of doing it yourself. Because you do not use the installer to upgrade or

modules/machine-api-overview.adoc

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= Machine API overview
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On {product-title} version 4.0 clusters, the Machine API performs all node
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For {product-title} v4 clusters, the Machine API performs all node
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management actions after the cluster installation finishes. Because of this
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system, {product-title} version 4.0 offers an elastic, dynamic provisioning
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method.
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system, {product-title} v4 offers an elastic, dynamic provisioning
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method on top of public or private cloud infrastructure.
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The Machine API is a combination of primary resources that are based on the upstream
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link:https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/cluster-api[Cluster API] project and

modules/node-management.adoc

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{product-title} version 4.0 integrates management of
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the container operating system and cluster management. Because the cluster manages
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both its updates and updates to Red Hat CoreOS, {product-title} provides an opinionated
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its updates, including updates to Red Hat CoreOS on cluster nodes, {product-title} provides an opinionated
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{product-title} employs three DaemonSets and controllers to simplify node management:
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These tools orchestrate operating system updates and configuration changes to
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the hosts by using standard Kuberentes-style constructs. A `machine-config-daemon`
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DaemonSet runs on each compute node in the cluster and watches for changes in
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DaemonSet runs on each machine in the cluster and watches for changes in
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the machine configuration for it to apply. The machine configuration is a subset
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of the Ignition configuration. The `machine-config-daemon` reads the machine configuration to see
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modules/operators-overview.adoc

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In {product-title} version 4.0, all cluster functions are divided into a series
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In {product-title} v4, all cluster functions are divided into a series
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of platform Operators. Platform operators manage a particular area of
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modules/security-overview.adoc

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= Security in {product-title}

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