Merge pull request #93753 from openshift-cherrypick-robot/cherry-pick-92604-to-enterprise-4.17

[enterprise-4.17] Update log6x-quickstart-opentelemetry.adoc

Author: xenolinux

modules/log6x-quickstart-opentelemetry.adoc

@@ -12,11 +12,13 @@ include::snippets/technology-preview.adoc[]
 To configure OTLP ingestion and enable the OpenTelemetry data model, follow these steps:
 
 .Prerequisites
-* Cluster administrator permissions
+* You have access to an {product-title} cluster with `cluster-admin` permissions.
+* You have installed the {oc-first}.
+* You have access to a supported object store. For example, AWS S3, Google Cloud Storage, {azure-short}, Swift, Minio, or {rh-storage}.
 
 .Procedure
 
-. Install the {clo}, {loki-op}, and {coo-first} from OperatorHub.
+. Install the `{clo}`, `{loki-op}`, and `{coo-first}` from OperatorHub.
 
 . Create a `LokiStack` custom resource (CR) in the `openshift-logging` namespace:
 +
@@ -58,34 +60,29 @@ $ oc create sa collector -n openshift-logging
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
-$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user logging-collector-logs-writer -z collector
+$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user logging-collector-logs-writer -z collector -n openshift-logging
 ----
 +
 [NOTE]
 ====
 The `ClusterRole` resource is created automatically during the Cluster Logging Operator installation and does not need to be created manually.
 ====
 
-. Allow the collector's service account to collect logs:
+. To collect logs, use the service account of the collector by running the following commands:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
-$ oc project openshift-logging
+$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-application-logs -z collector -n openshift-logging
 ----
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
-$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-application-logs -z collector
+$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-audit-logs -z collector -n openshift-logging
 ----
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
-$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-audit-logs -z collector
-----
-+
-[source,terminal]
-----
-$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-infrastructure-logs -z collector
+$ oc adm policy add-cluster-role-to-user collect-infrastructure-logs -z collector -n openshift-logging
 ----
 +
 [NOTE]
@@ -155,4 +152,6 @@ You cannot use `lokiStack.labelKeys` when `dataModel` is `Otel`. To achieve simi
 ====
 
 .Verification
-* Verify that OTLP is functioning correctly by going to *Observe* -> *OpenShift Logging* -> *LokiStack* -> *Writes* in the OpenShift web console, and checking *Distributor - Structured Metadata*.
+* To verify that OTLP is functioning correctly, complete the following steps:
+.. In the OpenShift web console, click *Observe* -> *OpenShift Logging* -> *LokiStack* -> *Writes*.
+.. Check the *Distributor - Structured Metadata* section.