OBSDOCS-917: Update installation docs

Author: max-cx

_attributes/common-attributes.adoc

@@ -120,6 +120,7 @@ endif::[]
 :DTShortName: distributed tracing platform
 :DTProductVersion: 3.1
 :JaegerName: Red Hat OpenShift distributed tracing platform (Jaeger)
+:JaegerOperator: Red Hat OpenShift distributed tracing platform
 :JaegerShortName: distributed tracing platform (Jaeger)
 :JaegerVersion: 1.53.0
 :OTELName: Red Hat build of OpenTelemetry

modules/distr-tracing-install-jaeger-operator.adoc

@@ -5,48 +5,45 @@ This module included in the following assemblies:
 
 :_mod-docs-content-type: PROCEDURE
 [id="distr-tracing-jaeger-operator-install_{context}"]
-= Installing the {JaegerName} Operator
+= Installing the {JaegerOperator} Operator
 
-To install {JaegerName}, you use the link:https://operatorhub.io/[OperatorHub] to install the {JaegerName} Operator.
+You can install the {JaegerOperator} Operator through the link:https://operatorhub.io/[*OperatorHub*].
 
 By default, the Operator is installed in the `openshift-operators` project.
 
 .Prerequisites
 * You have access to the {product-title} web console.
 * You have access to the cluster as a user with the `cluster-admin` role. If you use {product-dedicated}, you must have an account with the `dedicated-admin` role.
-* If you require persistent storage, you must also install the OpenShift Elasticsearch Operator before installing the {JaegerName} Operator.
-
-[WARNING]
-====
-Do not install Community versions of the Operators. Community Operators are not supported.
-====
+* If you require persistent storage, you must install the {es-op} before installing the {JaegerOperator} Operator.
 
 .Procedure
 
 . Log in to the {product-title} web console as a user with the `cluster-admin` role. If you use {product-dedicated}, you must have an account with the `dedicated-admin` role.
 
 . Navigate to *Operators* -> *OperatorHub*.
 
-. Type *distributed tracing platform* into the filter to locate the {JaegerName} Operator.
+. Search for the {JaegerOperator} Operator by entering *distributed tracing platform* in the search field.
 
-. Click the *{JaegerName} Operator* provided by Red Hat to display information about the Operator.
+. Select the *{JaegerOperator}* Operator, which is *provided by Red Hat*, to display information about the Operator.
 
 . Click *Install*.
 
-. On the *Install Operator* page, select the *stable* Update Channel. This automatically updates your Operator as new versions are released.
+. For the *Update channel* on the *Install Operator* page, select *stable* to automatically update the Operator when new versions are released.
 //If you select a maintenance channel, for example, *Stable*, you will receive bug fixes and security patches for the length of the support cycle for that version.
 
 . Accept the default *All namespaces on the cluster (default)*. This installs the Operator in the default `openshift-operators` project and makes the Operator available to all projects in the cluster.
 
-* Accept the default *Automatic* approval strategy. By accepting the default, when a new version of this Operator is available, Operator Lifecycle Manager (OLM) automatically upgrades the running instance of your Operator without human intervention. If you select *Manual* updates, when a newer version of an Operator is available, OLM creates an update request. As a cluster administrator, you must then manually approve that update request to have the Operator updated to the new version.
+. Accept the default *Automatic* approval strategy.
 +
 [NOTE]
 ====
-The *Manual* approval strategy requires a user with appropriate credentials to approve the Operator install and subscription process.
+If you accept this default, the Operator Lifecycle Manager (OLM) automatically upgrades the running instance of this Operator when a new version of the Operator becomes available.
+
+If you select *Manual* updates, the OLM creates an update request when a new version of the Operator becomes available. To update the Operator to the new version, you must then manually approve the update request as a cluster administrator. The *Manual* approval strategy requires a cluster administrator to manually approve Operator installation and subscription.
 ====
 
 . Click *Install*.
 
 . Navigate to *Operators* -> *Installed Operators*.
 
-. On the *Installed Operators* page, select the `openshift-operators` project. Wait until you see that the {JaegerName} Operator shows a status of "Succeeded" before continuing.
+. On the *Installed Operators* page, select the `openshift-operators` project. Wait for the *Succeeded* status of the {JaegerOperator} Operator before continuing.

modules/distr-tracing-tempo-install-cli.adoc

@@ -207,12 +207,10 @@ $ oc get pods
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
-$ export TEMPO_URL=$(oc get route -n <control_plane_namespace> tempo -o jsonpath='{.spec.host}')
+$ oc get route
 ----
 
 .. Open `\https://<route_from_previous_step>` in a web browser.
-
-.. Log in using your cluster administrator credentials for the web console.
 +
 [NOTE]
 ====

modules/distr-tracing-tempo-install-web-console.adoc

@@ -22,18 +22,22 @@ You can install the {TempoShortName} from the *Administrator* view of the web co
 
 .. Go to *Operators* -> *OperatorHub* and search for `{TempoOperator}`.
 
-.. Select the *{TempoOperator}* that is *OpenShift Operator for Tempo* -> *Install* -> *Install* -> *View Operator*.
+.. Select the *{TempoOperator}* that is *provided by Red Hat*.
 +
 [IMPORTANT]
 ====
-This installs the Operator with the default presets:
+The following selections are the default presets for this Operator:
 
 * *Update channel* -> *stable*
 * *Installation mode* -> *All namespaces on the cluster*
 * *Installed Namespace* -> *openshift-tempo-operator*
 * *Update approval* -> *Automatic*
 ====
 
+.. Select the *Enable Operator recommended cluster monitoring on this Namespace* checkbox.
+
+.. Select *Install* -> *Install* -> *View Operator*.
+
 .. In the *Details* tab of the page of the installed Operator, under *ClusterServiceVersion details*, verify that the installation *Status* is *Succeeded*.
 
 . Create a project of your choice for the *TempoStack* instance that you will create in a subsequent step: go to *Home* -> *Projects* -> *Create Project*.
@@ -128,8 +132,6 @@ The stack deployed in this example is configured to receive Jaeger Thrift over H
 .. Go to *Networking* -> *Routes* and kbd:[Ctrl+F] to search for `tempo`.
 
 .. In the *Location* column, open the URL to access the Tempo console.
-
-.. Select *Log In With OpenShift* to use your cluster administrator credentials for the web console.
 +
 [NOTE]
 ====