incorporating peer review feedback

Author: lahinson

hosted_control_planes/hcp-prepare/hcp-override-resource-util.adoc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ include::_attributes/common-attributes.adoc[]
 
 toc::[]
 
-The set of baseline measurements for resource utilization can vary in every hosted cluster.
+The set of baseline measurements for resource utilization can vary in each hosted cluster.
 
 include::modules/hcp-override.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 include::modules/hcp-disable-metrics.adoc[leveloffset=+1]

modules/hcp-disable-metrics.adoc

@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
 [id="hcp-disable-metrics_{context}"]
 = Disabling the metric service monitoring
 
-After enabling the `hypershift-addon` managed cluster addon, the metric service monitoring is configured by default so that {product-title} monitoring can gather metrics from `hypershift-addon`. 
+After you enable the `hypershift-addon` managed cluster add-on, metric service monitoring is configured by default so that {product-title} monitoring can gather metrics from `hypershift-addon`. 
 
 .Procedure
 
-You can disable the metric service monitoring by completing the following steps:
+You can disable metric service monitoring by completing the following steps:
 
 . Log in to your hub cluster by running the following command:
 +
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ You can disable the metric service monitoring by completing the following steps:
 $ oc login
 ----
 
-. Open the `hypershift-addon-deploy-config` add-on deployment configuration specification for editing by running the following command:
+. Edit the `hypershift-addon-deploy-config` add-on deployment configuration specification by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
@@ -45,6 +45,11 @@ spec:
     value: "true"
 ----
 +
-<1> The `disableMetrics=true` customized variable disables the metric service monitoring configuration for both new and existing `hypershift-addon` managed cluster add-ons.
+<1> The `disableMetrics=true` customized variable disables metric service monitoring for both new and existing `hypershift-addon` managed cluster add-ons.
 
-. Save the changes.
+. Apply the changes to the configuration specification by running the following command:
++
+[source,terminal]
+----
+$ oc apply -f <filename>.yaml
+----

modules/hcp-override.adoc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 [id="hcp-override_{context}"]
 = Overriding resource utilization measurements for a hosted cluster
 
-You can override the resource utilization measurements based on the type and pace of your cluster workload. Complete the following steps:
+You can override resource utilization measurements based on the type and pace of your cluster workload.
 
 .Procedure