feedback

[MySecondLanguage]

The home page design does not meet the expectations we discussed and feels inconsistent and unappealing. To ensure better quality, I’ve decided to reduce the scope of work. Focus only on designing the Home Page and Pricing Page—no additional pages are needed.

The designs must reflect a polished and professional standard. I’m launching ads next month with a marketing team, and we cannot compete effectively with a subpar home page design. The examples provided should guide the revisions.

Also, the current design shows a lack of consistency between sections, which needs to be resolved. With this narrowed focus, I trust you can deliver a high-quality outcome. Let me know if clarification is needed

In your design, what liked in home:
A. First section is good
B. Inegration section is good
and some section good

Things that we didn't meet:

1. I was expecting animated/interactive/moving graphics, see an example: https://dribbble.com/shots/16499285-Egnyte-Platform-Infographic

2. The icon/logo was supposed to add lined icon/logo, talking about search section icon

3. The carbon emissin design is not as expected, You can remove this section if you find complexity

4. Our compliance standard section design is not good, the icon you used, it doesnt comply with overall design

5. Native excellent for ecommerec, this section mileston design is good but the design is purely average

6. buy online, pick in store section's image you used, we expected moving graphics ore the design should be consistent with existing design

7. It was supposed to add abstract/lined background in footer or some other section where applicable but i see only abstract background used in first section which is good but also in a few section, add abstract graphics as background like map or something else which are related

8. Also the mega menu section is missing, mobile version too

I had attached some effect example here:

1. Effect that we love #4

and many section is missing what i have attached here: #1

As i said always, for the design improvement, if you wants me to buy graphics or models image or abstract graphics or something else, give me link, i will buy. or you can video, i will buy stock video or you can use photo like shopping bag, warehouse, storefront etc. You just give me link, i will buy premium images

the moving graphics i am talking about, see an example:

We want to be thousand time better than our competitor, the design should should instantly manipulate a client