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Author: AlexicaWright

docs/modules/ROOT/pages/operations/browser-sso.adoc

@@ -151,5 +151,4 @@ Example for Browser: +
 // |`idp_id` | `idp_id=<idp_id>`	| `idp_id=keycloak-oidc` 	| The user arrives with a URL param named idp_id, mapped to the information in the discovery data to figure out how to proceed.
 // |===
 
-For convenience you can use the `sso_redirect=<idp_id>` url parameter to automatically trigger the SSO flow without needing to click the 
-"Login with SSO" button in the Browser UI.
+For convenience, the `sso_redirect=<idp_id>` URL parameter can be used to automatically trigger the SSO flow without needing to click the "Login with SSO" button in the Browser UI.

docs/modules/ROOT/pages/operations/browser-url-parameters.adoc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ http://localhost:7474/browser?preselectAuthMethod=[NATIVE]|[SSO]|[NO_AUTH]
 ** `[SSO]` lets you sign in using SSO.
 ** `[NO_AUTH]` means that no authorization is required.
 
-You can automatically redirect to an SSO provider, as if a user clicked the corresponding SSO button in the UI with the `sso_redirect` url parameter.
+Additionally, it is also possible to automatically redirect to an SSO provider, as if a user clicked the corresponding SSO button in the UI with the `sso_redirect` url parameter.
 
 The syntax is:
 
@@ -60,7 +60,8 @@ The syntax is:
 http://localhost:7474/browser?sso_redirect=<idp_id>
 ----
 
-Where the `idp_id` is the `id` of the SSO provider. To ensure Browser finds the correct SSO providers, it's recommended you also pass the `connectURL`.
+The `idp_id` in the example is the `id` of the SSO provider.
+To ensure Browser finds the correct SSO providers, it's recommended to also pass the `connectURL`.
 
 
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