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Author: rsill-neo4j

modules/ROOT/pages/ogm/installation.adoc

@@ -23,7 +23,8 @@ Here are some examples of how you can use the OGM.
 [[ogm-examples-custom-resolvers]]
 === Custom Resolvers
 
-A common use case for the OGM are custom resolvers inside a Neo4j GraphQL instance due to the fact that it has access to some fields which the Neo4j GraphQL Library has not.
+The OGM has access to some fields which the Neo4j GraphQL Library doesn't.
+It is common practice to use the OGM to create custom resolvers when dealing with such fields.
 For example, you can have a `password` field marked with the `@private` directive and a custom resolver for creating users with passwords.
 
 Execute the following to create an example application directory and create a new project:
@@ -157,7 +158,7 @@ async function main() {
 main();
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-Additionally, create a file `utils.js` in the same directory.
+Create the file `utils.js` in the same directory.
 Install additional dependencies:
 
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