Comments on review of 5.0rc pages 527-552

[mahermanns]

Problem

Chapter 11: Process init

• use of comma separated list (528, l.32)
• awkward line break (529, l.33)
• use of "implementation-defined" (533, l.19)
• ACCEPT not hyperlinked (534, l.33)
• MPI_ERR_PORT not hyperlinked (535, l. 24) (currently works as intended)
• MPI_ERR_SERVICE not hyperlinked (537, l.39) (dito)
• MPI_ERR_NAME not hyperlinked (538, l.22) (dito)
• List of reserved key values in arbitrary order (538,l.33)
• Use of "Simplest Example" in example name does not explain how it does things (538,l.42)
• "Here is the client" 540, l.28) (should [if at all] part of a larger pass through the chapter)
• UNIVERSE_SIZE not hyperlinked (541, l.16)
• Use of mpiexec is not hyperlinked (541,l.43) (\mpilaunch currently not hyperlink enabled, but intended for a later standard)
• MPI_APPNUMM is not hyperlinked (542, l.34)
• high quality implementation not hyphenated (544, l.13)
• may not == must not? (544, l.35) (decided original wording is correct)

The deleted items are due to the fact that the main definition does not hyperlink to itself.

Chapter 12: One-sided Comm.

None.

Text is sometimes very colloquial in its writing (e.g., use of "of course" and "clumsy").

Proposal

Fix individual text fragments marked.

Changes to the Text

See https://github.com/mpi-forum/mpi-standard/pull/1039

Impact on Implementations

None.

Impact on Users

better readability

References and Pull Requests

None.

[mahermanns]

The items checked are addressed by https://github.com/mpi-forum/mpi-standard/pull/1039