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api-reference/beta/resources/cloudpconpremisesconnection.md

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 |id|String|Unique identifier for the Azure network connection. Read-only.|
 |inUse|Boolean|When `true`, the Azure network connection is in use. When `false`, the connection isn't in use. You can't delete a connection that’s in use. Returned only on `$select`. For an example that shows how to get the **inUse** property, see [Example 2: Get the selected properties of an Azure network connection, including healthCheckStatusDetails](../api/cloudpconpremisesconnection-get.md). Read-only.|
 |inUseByCloudPc|Boolean| Indicates whether a Cloud PC is using this on-premises network connection. `true` if at least one Cloud PC is using it. Otherwise, `false`. Read-only. Default is false. |
-|healthCheckPaused|Boolean| `false` if the regular health checks on the network/domain configuration are currently active. `true` if the checks are paused. If you perform a create or update operation on a **OnPremisesNetworkConnection** resource, this value is set to `false` for 4 weeks. If you retry a health check on network/domain configuration, this value is set to `false` for two weeks. If the **onPremisesNetworkConnection** resource is attached in a **provisioningPolicy** or used by a Cloud PC in the past 4 weeks, `healthCheckPaused` is set to `false`. Read-only. Default is `false`.|
+|healthCheckPaused|Boolean| `false` if the regular health checks on the network/domain configuration are currently active. `true` if the checks are paused. If you perform a create or update operation on a **onPremisesNetworkConnection** resource, this value is set to `false` for 4 weeks. If you retry a health check on network/domain configuration, this value is set to `false` for two weeks. If the **onPremisesNetworkConnection** resource is attached in a **provisioningPolicy** or used by a Cloud PC in the past 4 weeks, `healthCheckPaused` is set to `false`. Read-only. Default is `false`.|
 |managedBy|[cloudPcManagementService](#cloudpcmanagementservice-values)|Specifies which services manage the Azure network connection. Possible values are: `windows365`, `devBox`, `unknownFutureValue`, `rpaBox`. You must use the `Prefer: include-unknown-enum-members` request header to get the following value in this [evolvable enum](/graph/best-practices-concept#handling-future-members-in-evolvable-enumerations): `rpaBox`. Read-only.|
 |organizationalUnit|String|The organizational unit (OU) in which the computer account is created. If left null, the OU configured as the default (a well-known computer object container) in your Active Directory domain (OU) is used. Optional.|
 |organizationalUnit|String|The organizational unit (OU) in which the computer account is created. If left null, the OU configured as the default (a well-known computer object container) in your Active Directory domain (OU) is used. Optional.|
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 |Member|Description|
 |:---|:---|
 |failed|Health checks notify the customer that the Azure network connection isn't properly configured or functioning. Provisioning fails. The customer needs to identify the issue and resolve it using the guidance provided by Azure network connection for provisioning to be successful.|
-|informational|Health checks provide information to the customer about current or associated prerequisite checks on Cloud PC add-on features such as Single Sign-On. This won't affect the provisioning of the customer's Cloud PC, but the information is intended to optimize the user experience.|
+|informational|Health checks provide information to the customer about current or associated prerequisite checks on Cloud PC add-on features such as Single Sign-On. Informational health checks don't affect the provisioning of the customer's Cloud PC. The information is intended to optimize the user experience.|
 |passed|Health checks notify the customer that the Azure network connection is operating as intended. Customer can provision their Cloud PC without any issue.|
 |pending|Created and waiting for health checks.|
 |running|Health checks are running.|