Update concepts/approvals-app-api.md

Co-authored-by: mnorman-ms <mnorman@steyer.net>

Author: v-sdhakshina

concepts/approvals-app-api.md

@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ The following table lists the APIs available across Microsoft Graph for the appr
 
 ## Key benefits of the Approvals app
 
-Here are some key benefits of the approval app:
+The Approvals app centralizes and simplifies the approval of expense requests, project requests, task requests, and more. The following list explains some of the benefits that result:
 
-* The Approvals app reduces the time and effort required to manage approvals by automating the workflow and notification process.
-* It provides a centralized hub where all approvals can be tracked, managed, and audited, offering greater transparency into the approval process.
-* Organizations can ensure consistency in how approvals are managed across various departments and teams.
-* The app can enforce compliance with organizational policies by ensuring that all necessary approvals are obtained before any action is taken.
+* Reduces time and effort required to manage approvals by automating the workflow and notification process.
+* Centralizes tracking, management, and auditing, which offers greater transparency into the approval process.
+* Manages approvals consistently across various departments and teams.
+* Enforces compliance with policy by enabling organizations to ensure that all necessary approvals are obtained before action is taken.
 
 ## See also