Editorial pass

Author: dobooth

src/_includes/config/redis-verify.md

@@ -50,10 +50,9 @@ If you use Redis for page caching, you'll see output similar to the following:
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-### Inspect Compressed Session data and Page Cache with GUI tool
+### Inspecting compressed data
 
-To easily inspect compressed Session data and Page Cache you can use [RDM](https://flathub.org/apps/details/dev.rdm.RDM)
-It supports automatic decompression of Magento 2 Session and Page cache and displays PHP session data in human-readable form.
+To inspect compressed Session data and Page Cache, the [Redis Desktop Manager](https://flathub.org/apps/details/dev.rdm.RDM) supports the automatic decompression of Magento 2 Session and Page cache and displays PHP session data in a human-readable form.
 
 ### Redis ping command