Update new-relic.md

Fixes #9280

Author: hguthrie

src/cloud/project/new-relic.md

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ The aggregated data includes information from the following logs:
 -  Logs for cloud services from the `var/log/platform/<project-ID>` directory
 -  Fastly CDN and WAF logs
 
-As soon as your project is connected to New Relic, you can use the New Relic Logs service to complete tasks like the following:
+When your project is connected to New Relic, you can use the New Relic Logs service to complete tasks like the following:
 
 -  Use [New Relic queries][New Relic query syntax for logs] to search aggregated log data
 -  Visualize log data through the New Relic Logs application
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@ When Adobe provisions your {{site.data.var.ece}} project, the License Owner rece
 A New Relic account can have only one person assigned to the Owner role. If you must change the account owner, assign the Admin role to the current Owner, then assign the Owner role to another user. See [Update the account owner] in the New Relic documentation for instructions.
 
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-Before assigning the Owner role to a user, verify that the user exists on the New Relic account for {{site.data.var.ece}}. If you need to add the user to that account and an existing account Owner or Admin cannot help, any user with access to the [Adobe Partnership Owner Account] for New Relic can add users on behalf of the customer.
+Before assigning the Owner role to a user, verify that the user exists on the New Relic account for {{site.data.var.ece}}. If you must add the user to that account and an existing account Owner or Admin cannot help, any user with access to the [Adobe Partnership Owner Account] for New Relic can add users on behalf of the customer.
 
-We recommend adding at least one **Admin** user to your New Relic account to manage all access, integrations, and tool usage. {{site.data.var.ece}} Project Owners and Admin users can add and remove users from the New Relic account. We also recommend that you do not create more than 5 full-access **Users**. Only grant full access to those that strictly require access to the complete feature set. There is no specific guidance on free **Restricted** users.
+We recommend adding at least one **Admin** user to your New Relic account to manage all access, integrations, and tool usage. {{site.data.var.ece}} Project Owners and Admin users can add and remove users from the New Relic account. We also recommend that you do not create more than five full-access **Users**. Only grant full access to users that strictly require access to the complete feature set. There is no specific guidance on free **Restricted** users.
 
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 To add a user: