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Co-authored-by: Bruce Denham <bdenham@adobe.com>

Author: hguthrie

src/guides/v2.4/config-guide/remote-storage/config-remote-storage-caching.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Remote storage provides a cache layer for external API calls. The caching is bas
 {:.procedure}
 To use Redis cache with [predis/predis][predis] extension:
 
-1. Add the `predis/predis` extension to the require section of your `composer.json` file.
+1. Add the `predis/predis` extension to the `require` section of your `composer.json` file.
 
    ```bash
    composer require predis/predis
@@ -43,4 +43,4 @@ To use Redis cache with [predis/predis][predis] extension:
 
 <!-- link definitions -->
 [flysystem]: https://flysystem.thephpleague.com/v1/docs/advanced/caching
-[predis]: https://github.com/predis/predis
+[predis]: https://github.com/predis/predis

src/guides/v2.4/config-guide/remote-storage/config-remote-storage-image-resize.md

@@ -6,15 +6,15 @@ functional_areas:
   - System
 ---
 
-Magento supports image resizing on the application side by default. With the Remote Storage module enabled, you can offload image resizing to the server side using Nginx, which is a simple and efficient way to save disk resources and optimize disk usage.
+By default, Magento supports image resizing on the application side. However, by enabling the Remote Storage module, you can use Nginx to offload image resizing to the server side, where you can save disk resources and optimize disk usage.
 
-The following diagram shows the process to store an image using Nginx, and whether the image requires resizing before it is stored in the cache. The resizing is determined by the parameters included in the URL, such as height and width.
+The following diagram shows how Nginx retrieves, resizes, and stores images in the cache. Resizing is determined by the parameters included in the URL, such as height and width.
 
 ![image resize]
 
 ## Configure URL format in Magento
 
-To perform an image resizing on the server side, you must configure Magento to provide the height and width arguments and a link to the image.
+To resize images on the server side, you must configure Magento to provide arguments for the height, width, and location (URL) of the image.
 
 {:.procedure}
 To configure Magento for server-side image resizing:
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ To configure Magento for server-side image resizing:
 
 ## Configure Nginx
 
-To continue the configuration to perform the server-side image resizing, you must prepare the `nginx.conf` file and provide a `proxy_pass` value for your chosen adapter.
+To continue configuring server-side image resizing, you must prepare the `nginx.conf` file and provide a `proxy_pass` value for your chosen adapter.
 
 {:.procedure}
 To enable Nginx to resize images:

src/guides/v2.4/config-guide/remote-storage/config-remote-storage.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ functional_areas:
   - Setup
 ---
 
-The Remote Storage module provides the option to store media files and schedule imports/exports in a persistent, remote storage container using a storage service, such as AWS S3 or Azure Blob Storage. By default, Magento stores media files in the same filesystem that contains the application. This is not efficient for complex, multi-server configurations, which can result in degraded performance when sharing resources. With this module, you can store media files in the `pub/media` directory and import/export files in the `var` directory in the remote object storage and take advantage of server-side image resizing.
+The Remote Storage module provides the option to store media files and schedule imports/exports in a persistent, remote storage container using a storage service, such as AWS S3 or Azure Blob Storage. By default, Magento stores media files in the same filesystem that contains the application. This is inefficient for complex, multi-server configurations, and can result in degraded performance when sharing resources. With the Remote Storage module, you can store media files in the `pub/media` directory and import/export files in the `var` directory of the remote object storage to take advantage of server-side image resizing.
 
 ![schema image]
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ The `parameter-name` refers to the specific remote storage parameter name. The f
 
 ### Storage adapters
 
-The default storage location is the local filesystem. A _storage adapter_ enables you to connect to a storage service and store your files anywhere. Magento supports configuring the following storage services:
+The default storage location is in the local filesystem. A _storage adapter_ enables you to connect to a storage service and store your files anywhere. Magento supports configuring the following storage services:
 
 -  [Amazon Simple Storage Service (Amazon S3)][AWS S3]
 
@@ -71,4 +71,4 @@ The sync command only migrates files in the `pub/media` directory, _not_ the imp
 [nginx-module]: http://nginx.org/en/docs/http/ngx_http_image_filter_module.html
 [schema image]: {{site.baseurl}}/common/images/config-remote-storage-schema.png
 {:width="500px"}
-[setup]: {{site.baseurl}}/guides/v2.4/install-gde/install/cli/install-cli-subcommands-deployment.html#instgde-cli-subcommands-configphp
+[setup]: {{site.baseurl}}/guides/v2.4/install-gde/install/cli/install-cli-subcommands-deployment.html#instgde-cli-subcommands-configphp

src/guides/v2.4/install-gde/install/cli/install-cli-install.md

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ The install command uses the following format:
 magento setup:install --<option>=<value> ... --<option>=<value>
 ```
 
-The following tables describe the installation option names and values. For example installation commands. See [Sample localhost installations](#install-cli-example).
+The following tables describe the installation option names and values, such as installation commands. See [Sample localhost installations](#install-cli-example).
 
 {:.bs-callout-info}
 Any options that contain spaces or special characters must be enclosed in either single or double quotes.