entered comments from sverma and jmatthews

Author: jfrontain

src/guides/v2.3/release-notes/2-3-7-p2.md

@@ -3,13 +3,13 @@ group: release-notes
 title: Adobe Commerce 2.3.7-p2 Release Notes
 ---
 
-{{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7-p2 is a security-only release that provides security fixes that enhance your Magento 2.3.7 deployment. Merchants can now install time-sensitive security fixes without applying the hundreds of functional fixes and enhancements that a full quarterly release provides. Patch 2.3.7-p2 is a security-only patch that provides fixes for vulnerabilities that have been identified in our previous quarterly release, {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7 and {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.3.7.
+{{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7-p2 is a security-only release that provides security fixes that enhance your {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7 or {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.3.7 deployment. Merchants can now install time-sensitive security fixes without applying the hundreds of functional fixes and enhancements that a full quarterly release provides. Patch 2.3.7-p2 is a security-only patch that provides fixes for vulnerabilities that have been identified in our previous quarterly release, {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7-p1.
 
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-PHP 7.3 reaches end of support in December 2021, and Adobe Commerce 2.3.x reaches end of support in April 2022. **We strongly recommend planning your upgrade now to Adobe Commerce 2.4.x or Magento Open Source 2.4.x and PHP 7.4.x to help maintain PCI compliance**.
+PHP 7.3 reaches end of support in December 2021, and {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.x and {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.3.x reaches end of support in April 2022. **We strongly recommend planning your upgrade now to {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.x or {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.x deployment to help maintain PCI compliance**.
 
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-Quarterly releases may contain backward-incompatible changes (BIC). {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 contains minor backward-incompatible changes. To review minor backward-incompatible changes, see [BIC reference]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/reference.html). (Major backward-incompatible issues are described in [BIC highlights]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/index.html). Not all releases introduce major BICs.)
+Quarterly releases may contain backward-incompatible changes (BIC). To review minor backward-incompatible changes, see [BIC reference]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/reference.html). (Major backward-incompatible issues are described in [BIC highlights]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/index.html). Not all releases introduce major BICs.)
 
 ## What's in this release?
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ This release also includes bug fixes for the [Klarna](https://docs.magento.com/u
 
 ### Resolution of known issues in Adobe Commerce 2.3.7-p1
 
-This release includes fixes for the following known issues, which were first identified in Adobe Commerce 2.3.7-p1:
+This release includes fixes for the following known issues, which were first identified in {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.3.7-p1:
 
 *  *PHP fatal error on upgrade*. This issue was previously addressed by patch `AC-384__Fix_Incompatible_PHP_Method__2.3.7-p1_ce.patch to address PHP fatal error on upgrade`.
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ This release includes fixes for the following known issues, which were first ide
 
 **Recent penetration test vulnerabilities** have been fixed in this release. <!--- MC-42431-->
 
-**The Content Security Policy directive `frame-ancestors`** now supports the source expression `unsafe-inline`.  [GitHub-33101](https://github.com/magento/magento2/issues/33101) <!--- MC-42632-->
+The Content Security Policy directive `frame-ancestors` now supports the source expression `unsafe-inline`.  [GitHub-33101](https://github.com/magento/magento2/issues/33101) <!--- MC-42632-->
 
 ## Known issue
 

src/guides/v2.4/release-notes/2-4-3-p1.md

@@ -3,10 +3,10 @@ group: release-notes
 title: Adobe Commerce 2.4.3-p1 Release Notes
 ---
 
-{{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3-p1 is a security-only release that provides 18 security fixes that enhance your Magento 2.4.3 deployment. Merchants can now install time-sensitive security fixes without applying the hundreds of functional fixes and enhancements that a full quarterly release provides. Patch 2.4.3-p1 provides fixes for vulnerabilities that have been identified in our previous quarterly release, {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 and {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.3.
+{{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3-p1 is a security-only release that provides 18 security fixes that enhance your {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 or {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.3 deployment. Merchants can now install time-sensitive security fixes without applying the hundreds of functional fixes and enhancements that a full quarterly release provides. Patch 2.4.3-p1 provides fixes for vulnerabilities that have been identified in our previous quarterly release, {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 and {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.3.
 
 {:.bs-callout-info}
-Quarterly releases may contain backward-incompatible changes (BIC). {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 contains minor backward-incompatible changes. To review minor backward-incompatible changes, see [BIC reference]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/reference.html). (Major backward-incompatible issues are described in [BIC highlights]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/index.html). Not all releases introduce major BICs.)
+Quarterly releases may contain backward-incompatible changes (BIC). To review minor backward-incompatible changes, see [BIC reference]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/reference.html). (Major backward-incompatible issues are described in [BIC highlights]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/backward-incompatible-changes/index.html). Not all releases introduce major BICs.)
 
 ## What's in this release?
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This release also includes bug fixes for the [Braintree](https://docs.magento.co
 
 ### Resolution of known issues in Adobe Commerce 2.4.3
 
-This release includes a fix for the PHP fatal error on upgrade known issue, which as first identified in which were first identified in Adobe Commerce 2.4.3 and Magento Open Source 2.4.3. This issue was previously addressed by patch `AC-384__Fix_Incompatible_PHP_Method__2.3.7-p1_ce.patch to address PHP fatal error on upgrade`.
+This release includes a fix for the PHP fatal error on upgrade known issue, which was first identified in {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 or {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.3. This issue was previously addressed by patch `AC-384__Fix_Incompatible_PHP_Method__2.3.7-p1_ce.patch to address PHP fatal error on upgrade`.
 
 ### Security highlights
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ This release includes a fix for the PHP fatal error on upgrade known issue, whic
 
 **Recent penetration test vulnerabilities** have been fixed in this release. <!--- MC-42431-->
 
-**The Content Security Policy directive `frame-ancestors`** now supports the source expression `unsafe-inline`.  [GitHub-33101](https://github.com/magento/magento2/issues/33101) <!--- MC-42632-->
+The Content Security Policy directive `frame-ancestors` now supports the source expression `unsafe-inline`.  [GitHub-33101](https://github.com/magento/magento2/issues/33101) <!--- MC-42632-->
 
 ## Installation and upgrade instructions