added keharper's excellent edit comment

Author: jfrontain

src/guides/v2.3/release-notes/2-3-7-p2.md

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 ## What's in this release?
 
-Six security fixes and several security enhancements are included in this security patch. Only one of these six fixes is an externally reported vulnerability. Fixes of externally reported vulnerabilities are documented in the [Adobe Security Bulletin](https://helpx.adobe.com/security/products/magento/apsb21-86.html).
+Six security fixes and several security enhancements are included in this security patch. Only one of these six fixes is an externally reported vulnerability. Fixes for externally reported vulnerabilities are documented in the [Adobe Security Bulletin](https://helpx.adobe.com/security/products/magento/apsb21-86.html).
 
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src/guides/v2.4/release-notes/2-4-3-p1.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Quarterly releases may contain backward-incompatible changes (BIC). To review mi
 
 ## What's in this release?
 
-Seven security fixes and several security enhancements are included in this security patch. Only one of these seven fixes is an externally reported vulnerability. Fixes of externally reported vulnerabilities are documented in the [Adobe Security Bulletin](https://helpx.adobe.com/security/products/magento/apsb21-86.html).
+Seven security fixes and several security enhancements are included in this security patch. Only one of these seven fixes is an externally reported vulnerability. Fixes for externally reported vulnerabilities are documented in the [Adobe Security Bulletin](https://helpx.adobe.com/security/products/magento/apsb21-86.html).
 
 Security-only patches typically include all hotfixes that have been released for the preceding complete release. This release incorporates the two hot fixes that have been released for {{ site.data.var.ee }} 2.4.3 and {{ site.data.var.ce }} 2.4.3. See [Adobe Commerce 2.4.3 Release Notes]({{page.baseurl}}/release-notes/commerce-2-4-3.html) for information about these hotfixes.