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Author: iherman

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           <h1>Draft</h1>
 
           <p>
-            This is a <em>proposed</em> charter for a JSON-LD Working Group, currently undergoing review by the W3C Management.
+            This is a <em>proposed</em> charter for a JSON-LD Working Group, currently undergoing formal review by the W3C Advisory Committee (AC).
             It is available on <a href="https://github.com/json-ld/charter">GitHub</a>;
-            feel free to raise <a href="https://github.com/json-ld/charter/issues">issues</a> to help further discussion. The plan is to submit this draft for the formal vote at the AC in March 2018.
+            feel free to raise <a href="https://github.com/json-ld/charter/issues">issues</a> to help further discussion. However, if you belong to a W3C Member, you may prefer to contact your AC representative to include your comment into the formal AC vote.
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-          <p>Items (mostly URL-s) that will need update when the charter are accepted are marked <span class="todo">thusly</span>.
+          <p>Items (mostly URL-s), that will need update if and when the charter are accepted, are marked <span class="todo">thusly</span>.
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       <h1 id="title">JSON-LD Working Group Charter</h1>
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           and in <a href="https://json-ld.org/presentations/JSON-LD-Update-TPAC-2017/assets/player/KeynoteDHTMLPlayer.html#0">slides used at TPAC 2017</a>.</p>
 
         <p>The work must be consistent with principles expressed in the <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/dwbp/">Data on the Web Best Practices</a> Recommendation. All changes must preserve backward compatibility for JSON-LD 1.0 documents. This means that, when processing legacy JSON-LD documents, JSON-LD 1.1 processors generate the same expanded output, unless that output is subject to <a href="https://www.w3.org/2001/sw/wiki/JSON_LD_Errata">errata in JSON-LD 1.0</a> or is otherwise an unspecified implementation detail.</p>
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           <h3 id="out-of-scope">Out of Scope</h3>
             <p>The following features are out of scope, and will not be addressed by this Working Group.</p>
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