Update apollo3.mdx (#7150)

Author: lizokm

src/platforms/android/configuration/integrations/apollo3.mdx

@@ -10,14 +10,16 @@ categories:
 
 <Note>
 
-Capturing transactions requires that you first <PlatformLink to="/performance/">set up performance monitoring</PlatformLink> if you haven't already.
+To be able to capture transactions, you'll need to first <PlatformLink to="/performance/">set up performance monitoring</PlatformLink>.
 
 </Note>
 
-Sentry Apollo3 integration provides the `SentryApollo3Interceptor` and the `SentryApollo3HttpInterceptor`, which create a span for each outgoing HTTP request executed with an [Apollo Kotlin](https://github.com/apollographql/apollo-kotlin) GraphQL client. For easier usage, the integration also provides extension functions on the `ApolloClient.Builder`.
+Sentry's Apollo3 integration provides both the `SentryApollo3Interceptor` and the `SentryApollo3HttpInterceptor`, which create a span for each outgoing HTTP request executed with an [Apollo Kotlin](https://github.com/apollographql/apollo-kotlin) GraphQL client. The integration also provides extension functions on the `ApolloClient.Builder`.
 
 ## Install
 
+To install Apollo3:
+
 ```groovy {tabTitle:Gradle}
 implementation 'io.sentry:sentry-apollo-3:{{@inject packages.version('sentry.java.apollo-3', '6.1.4') }}'
 ```
@@ -50,7 +52,7 @@ val apollo = ApolloClient.builder()
 
 ## Manual Configuration
 
-When using a custom `NetworkTransport`, the `SentryInterceptors` need to be added manually, because `HttpInterceptors` need to be added to the `NetworkTransport`:
+Because `HttpInterceptors` need to be added to the `NetworkTransport`, the `SentryInterceptors` need to be added manually if you're using a custom `NetworkTransport`:
 
 ```java
 import com.apollographql.apollo3.ApolloClient;