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Co-authored-by: Joshua <62268199+minimalsm@users.noreply.github.com>

Author: jmcook1186

src/content/staking/saas/index.md

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 ## What to consider {#what-to-consider}
 
-There are a growing number of staking-as-a-service providers to help you stake your ETH, but each come with different risks and benefits. Note that **all** SaaS options require additional trust assumptions compared to home-staking. There is additional code wrapping the Ethereum clients that might not be open and auditable. SaaS also potentially has a detrimental effect on network decentralization. Depending on the setup, you may not control your own validator - the operator _could_ act dishonestly using your ETH.
+There are a growing number of SaaS providers to help you stake your ETH, but each come with different risks and benefits. Note that **all** SaaS options require additional trust assumptions compared to home-staking. There is additional code wrapping the Ethereum clients that might not be open and auditable. SaaS also potentially has a detrimental effect on network decentralization. Depending on the setup, you may not control your own validator - the operator _could_ act dishonestly using your ETH.
 
 Attribute indicators are used below to signal notable strengths or weaknesses a listed SaaS provider may have. Use this section as a reference for how we define these attributes while you're choosing a service to help with your staking journey.
 

src/content/staking/solo/index.md

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 Solo staking is the act of [running an Ethereum node](/run-a-node/) connected to the internet and depositing 32 ETH to activate a [validator](#faq), giving you the ability to participate directly in network consensus.
 
-**Solo-staking increases the decentralization of the Ethereum network**, making Ethereum more censorship-resistant and robust against attacks. Other staking methods may not help the network in the same ways. This is why staking at home is the gold standard for securing Ethereum.
+**Solo staking increases the decentralization of the Ethereum network**, making Ethereum more censorship-resistant and robust against attacks. Other staking methods may not help the network in the same ways. This is why solo staking is the gold standard for securing Ethereum.
 
 An Ethereum node consists of both an execution layer (EL) client, as well as a consensus layer (CL) client. These clients are software that work together, along with a valid set of signing keys, to verify transactions and blocks, attest to the correct head of the chain, aggregate attestations, and propose blocks.
 
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 ## Why stake solo? {#why-stake-solo}
 
-Solo staking comes with more responsibility - this is why validators get paid in ETH - but provides you with maximum control over your funds and staking setup.
+Solo staking comes with more responsibility but provides you with maximum control over your funds and staking setup.
 
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