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Author: keharper

src/pages/graphql/schema/customer/queries/all-segments.md

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 The `allCustomerSegments` query returns information about the available customer segments.
 
-Customers segments allow shoppers to dynamically display content and promotions to specific customers, based on various properties.
-Some examples are customer address, order history, and shopping cart contents.
+Customer segments allow merchants to dynamically display content and promotions to specific customers, based on various properties.
+Examples include customer address, order history, and shopping cart contents.
 
 ## Syntax