Update github-award-2024.mdx

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/github-award-2024.mdx

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-Look mom, we just won a freaking GitHub Award!! 🏆
+Look mom, we just won a freaking GitHub Award! 🏆
 
-From the GitHub Student Developer Pack partnership in 2024 to winning this award at [GitHub Universe](https://githubuniverse.com) conference held in SF, this was truly a special moment for our little team. 
+From the **GitHub Student Developer Pack** partnership in 2024 to winning this award at [GitHub Universe](https://githubuniverse.com) conference held in SF, this was truly a special moment for our little team. 
 
 Thank you GitHub for this recognition! 🌟
 
 #### 📜 The Award
 
-Here's what GitHub said about us:
+Here’s what GitHub had to say about us:
 
 > (Cue the Super Mario Bros PowerUp sound effect!) 
 
 > At only two-years-old, Codédex is already used in over 800 high schools and colleges in the United States, Canada, Japan, Spain, Mexico, Colombia, and India. GitHub first partnered with Codédex in Spring of 2024. Since then, they’ve held monthly challenges, hosted hackathons, and built engaging projects that have been enjoyed by an active user base of over 200,000 people. They also hit the road for a 2024 Fall Campus Tour, which included workshops, swag, and support to some of the biggest coding clubs at colleges across the North American east coast. Codédex hits the spot of community and collaboration for a generation of hungry young coders.
 
 > _The Phenomenal Education Partner Award recognizes GitHub Education partners that provide strong support and opportunities for students, teachers, and schools._
 
-**Note:** We actually have 400,000 registered users now. :)
+**Note:** Our community has actually grown to 400,000 registered users now. :)
 
 #### 🏆 Unboxing Video
 
-Here's the team reaction when we got the mysterious package from GitHub. 😂
+Here's the team reaction when we got a mysterious package from GitHub... 😂
 
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 #### 🙏 Thank Yous
 
-Big thank you to the GitHub Edu team, especically Morgan Ersery, Juan Pa, and PJ Metz for nominating us and being awesome supporters. We have another GitHub partnership coming up. 🤫
+A huge thank you to the GitHub Education team, especially Morgan Ersery, Juan Pa, and PJ Metz, for nominating us and being such incredible supporters.
 
-Huge kudos to the Codédex team for this win. 🫰 
+And, of course, mad props to the Codédex team — our blood, sweat, and tears are starting to pay off. 
+
+More exciting GitHub collaborations coming soon... stay tuned! 🤫
 
 - Sonny