Update earth-day-2024.mdx

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/earth-day-2024.mdx

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 #### What is “One Tree Planted”?
 
-[One Tree Planted](https://onetreeplanted.org) (OTP) is a 501c3 non-profit with a focus on Global Reforestation. 
+[One Tree Planted](https://onetreeplanted.org) (OTP) is a 501(c)(3) non-profit with a focus on Global Reforestation. 
 
 Started in 2014, OTP has worked with 378+ reforestation partners across 82+ countries. These OTP projects restore forests after fires and floods, create jobs, build communities, and protect habitat for wildlife. In 2023, OTP planted over 51 million trees. 🌳
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 ![One Tree Planted](https://i.imgur.com/DTrkCdU.png)
-<div style={{textAlign: "center"}}>(One Tree Planted website)</div>
+<div style={{textAlign: "center"}}>(https://onetreeplanted.org)</div>
 
 #### But... why?
 
@@ -44,11 +43,11 @@ While our home is beautiful, it's our job to keep it that way.
 
 > “If you won’t give a dime out of a dollar, you won’t give $1 million out of $10 million.” - Tony Robbins
 
-Money is oxygen for a new business and we are not a profitable one. So this is against YC, business school, and startup books advice to "be relentlessly resourceful", but hey, we’ve broken pretty much every conventional startup rule by now. And we are still here.
+Money is oxygen for a new business and we are not a profitable one. So this is against traditional YC, business school, and startup books wisdom to "be relentlessly resourceful". But hey, we’ve broken pretty much every conventional startup rule by now. And we are still here.
 
 Tony Robbins once said, “If you won’t give a dime out of a dollar, you won’t give $1 million out of $10 million. The time to give is now. When I had nothing, I began this process. The reward is that if you give, even at the times when you think you have very little, you’ll teach your brain that there is more than enough. You can leave scarcity behind and move toward a world of abundance.”
 
-Giving back begins not when we become profitable, but now, in the early days when we get to define the type of company we want to become one day.
+Giving back begins not when we become profitable, but now, in the early days when we get to define the type of company we want to become.
 
 Earth is all we’ve got. Go touch some grass today and enjoy some sun. 🌞