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 # 🎉**Welcome to AIMon Rely**
 
-AIMon Rely is a state-of-the-art system consisting of multiple models for detecting LLM quality issues during offline evaluations and continuous production monitoring. We offer
-hallucination metrics that is fast, reliable and cost-effective. We also support additional metrics such as
-completeness, conciseness and toxicity. 
+AIMon Rely helps developers build, ship, and monitor LLM Apps more confidently and reliably with its state-of-the-art, multi-model system for detecting LLM quality issues. It helps seamlessly with both offline evaluations and continuous production monitoring. AIMon Rely offers fast, reliable, and cost-effective hallucination detection and related metrics. It also supports other important quality metrics such as completeness, conciseness, and toxicity. Read our [blog post](https://aimon.ai/blogs/introducing-rely) for more details.
 
-Read our [blog post](https://aimon.ai/blogs/introducing-rely) for more details.
-
-✨ **Join our community on [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/generativeair/shared_invite/zt-2jab62lsj-xM9a_s~Qweu8lf3YS2cANg) 
-or reach out to us at info@aimon.ai to get your API key.**
+✨ **Join our community on [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/generativeair/shared_invite/zt-2jab62lsj-xM9a_s~Qweu8lf3YS2cANg)**
 
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-    <img src="images/aimon-rely-image.png" alt="AIMon Rely" width="550" height="450">
+    <img src="images/aimon-rely-image.png" alt="AIMon Rely" width="450" height="350">
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 ## Metrics Supported
 
-These are the quality metrics that are currently available via the API. Some of them are in progress and will be
-available in a future release.
+The following is a list of quality metrics that are currently available and on our roadmap. Please reach out to express your interest in any of these.
 
 | Metric                                           | Status                                                       |
 |--------------------------------------------------|--------------------------------------------------------------|
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 ## Getting Started
 
-### SDK and UI
+You can use AIMon either through an SDK or through an API. Below you will find instructions on 1. how to use the SDK along with AIMon's UI and 2. how you could use it directly through our REST APIs.
+
+### 1. SDK and UI
 
 AIMon supports asynchronous instrumentation or synchronous detections for the metrics mentioned above. Use these steps
 to get started with using the AIMon SDK and the product.
 
-- Step 1: Get access to the beta product by joining the wait list on our [website](https://aimon.ai/) or by requesting
+- Step 1: Get access to the beta product by joining the waitlist on our [website](https://aimon.ai/) or by requesting
           it on [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/generativeair/shared_invite/zt-2jab62lsj-xM9a_s~Qweu8lf3YS2cANg) or sending an email to info@aimon.ai
 - Step 2: Install the AIMon SDK by running `pip install aimon` in your terminal.
-- Step 3: Refer to the [sample notebook](examples/notebooks/aimon_sdk_langchain_summarization.ipynb) for an example of how to instrument an LLM application asynchronously using the SDK.
-          You can also refer to the sample [streamlit application](examples/langchain_summarization_app.py) for an example for synchronous detections.
+- Step 3: For an example of how to instrument an LLM application **asynchronously** using the SDK, please refer to the [sample notebook](examples/notebooks/aimon_sdk_langchain_summarization.ipynb) 
+- Step 4: For an example of synchronous detections using the SDK, please refer to the sample [streamlit application](examples/langchain_summarization_app.py) 
 
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     <img src="images/product_apps_page.png" alt="AIMon Product">
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-### API
+### 2. API
 
 AIMon detections can be accessed via REST APIs. Here are the steps to access the API:
 
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 ✅ Support for a context length of up to 32,000 tokens (with plans to further expand this in the near future).
 
-Overall, AIMon Rely is 10 times cheaper, 4 times faster and close to or even **better than GPT-4** on the benchmarks
+Overall, AIMon Rely is 10 times cheaper, 4 times faster, and close to or even **better than GPT-4** on the benchmarks
 making it a suitable choice for both offline and online detection of hallucinations.
 
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 ### Completeness, Conciseness Detection
 
-There is a lack of industry standard benchmark datasets for these metrics. We will be publishing an evaluation dataset soon.
+There is a lack of industry-standard benchmark datasets for these metrics. We will be publishing an evaluation dataset soon.
 Stay Tuned! <span style="font-size: 16px;">⌛</span>
 
 ## Pricing
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 - In addition, we are working on something awesome to make the offline evaluation and continuous model quality
   monitoring experience more seamless.
 
-Join our [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/generativeair/shared_invite/zt-2jab62lsj-xM9a_s~Qweu8lf3YS2cANg) for the latest updates and discussions on generative AI reliability.
+Join our [Slack](https://join.slack.com/t/generativeair/shared_invite/zt-2jab62lsj-xM9a_s~Qweu8lf3YS2cANg) for the latest updates and discussions on generative AI reliability.