Documentation Issues #727
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Apple II DeskTop documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, fixes: Under "Getting Started", under "Compatibility": "Apple II DeskTop requires an Apple II, compatible, or emulator with at least 128k of RAM and Double-HiRes graphics support." should instead be "DeskTop uses the double-hires display mode." should instead be "The Laser 128 line of computers has a MONO/COLOR switch above the keyboard." should instead be Under "Using the DeskTop", under "Working With Disks": "5.25" floppy icon for 140k disks in Disk II drives" should instead be Under "Using the DeskTop", under "Working With Files", under "Folder — DIR": "ℹ️ NOTE: To automatically close the parent window, hold down ▲ while double-clicking or selecting File > Open." should instead be Under "Using the DeskTop", under "Working With Files", under "Graphics — FOT/$08, or certain BIN files:": "BIN files with aux type $2000 or $4000 taking up 17 blocks (Hires) or 33 blocks (Double-Hires)" should instead be Under "Using the DeskTop", under "Working With Files", under "BASIC programs — BAS": "To return to DeskTop, type BYE at the BASIC prompt." should instead be Under "Using the DeskTop", under "Moving, Copying, and Deleting Files": "Drag a volume icon onto a folder or volume icon to copy the contents of the source volume into the destination." should be updated to reference the fact that you can also drag a source volume icon onto a destination window in order to copy the contents of the source volume into the destination window. |
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Apple II DeskTop "About", located at https://www.a2desktop.com/about, fixes: "Apple (or compatible) with 128k and Double Hi-Res graphics: Apple IIe, IIc, IIc Plus, IIgs, IIe Option Card for Mac, Laser 128, or Franklin ACE 2X00/500." should instead be |
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Apple II DeskTop "History", located at https://www.a2desktop.com/history, fixes: "The application was developed using the MouseGraphics ToolKit by Apple, which provided the graphics primitives for drawing shapes and text to the complex double-hires graphics screen, and the windowing primitives such as events, cursors, menus, windows, scrollbars and mouse support." should instead be |
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Additional Apple II DeskTop documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, fixes: Under "Troubleshooting", under "The screen has color fringes everywhere and text is difficult to read.": "Apple II DeskTop uses monochrome double-hires graphics." should instead be |
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Above updates applied, except in cases where optional alternatives (e.g. "BYE or bye") are simply excessive and make the instructions harder to understand. |
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a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes: Under "General Enhancements": "* Mouse Keys mode simplified: (#185)
"* Mouse Keys mode simplified: (#185)
Under "DeskTop Enhancements": Please reduce the amount of empty space between the different entries under "DeskTop Enhancements" in order to match the amount of empty space between the different entries throughout the rest of the release notes. "* New file type icons: graphics, IIgs-specific, AppleWorks, relocatable, command, fonts, music, and DAs. (#105, #116)" should instead be "* Icons for volumes positioned more predictably and sensibly. (#94, #375, #540)" should instead be "* Show appropriate error when copying a file onto itself. (#630)
"* Show appropriate error when trying to replace an item with itself or an item it contains. (#630, #634, #635, #636)" to consolidate these entries because issue #630 is very closely related to issue #634, issue #635 and issue #636. Please add an entry to the "DeskTop Enhancements" section stating that desk accessories, directories and previewable files can now be launched from the Shortcuts menu and from the Shortcuts > Run a Shortcut... dialog box. Under "DeskTop Enhancements", under "Keyboard-related changes:": "* Shift key works as modifier to extend selection, on IIgs and systems with shift key mod. (#340)" should instead be "* Apple+` or Apple+Tab cycles through open windows; Shift+Apple+` (and Shift+Apple+Tab, when detectable) cycles in reverse. (#143, #230)" should instead be "* Tab/Shift+Tab (or `/Shift+`) change selected icon in alphabetical order. (#275, #671)" should instead be Under "DeskTop Enhancements", under a proposed new "File Picker Dialogs:" subsection: Please add an entry to a proposed new "File Picker Dialogs:" subsection in the "DeskTop Enhancements" section referencing issue #598 and issue #605 that you can now press the Apple-Tab (or Shift-Tab, when detectable) keyboard shortcuts or hold down the Apple key (or Shift key, when detectable) while clicking Change Drive to reverse changing the order of drives in the file picker dialog boxes. Under "Desk Accessory Enhancements": The "Desk Accessory Enhancements" section should be renamed "Desk Accessory and Apple Menu Enhancements" because this section also includes Apple menu enhancements that do not just relate to desk accessories and Apple menu enhancements that do not relate to desk accessories at all. "* Show Text File DA: Keyboard support. Esc quits, arrows scroll, Space toggles modes. (#4, #403)" should instead be Under "Additional Desk Accessories", under "Control Panels": "* Control Panels
"* Control Panels
Under "Additional Desk Accessories", under "Screen Savers": "* Screen Savers
"* Screen Savers
Under "Additional Desk Accessories": "The Show Text File DA is now part of the file preview functionality (see below)." should instead be Under "Notable Fixes": "* Fix inconsistencies around maximum number of icons allowed. (#529, #537, and more)" should instead be "* Control-Reset quits cleanly back to ProDOS (except buggy emulators). (#141)" should instead be "* Disk Copy moved to a separate file that can be optionally removed, allowing other components to fit on a floppy disk. #216" should instead be Under "Notable Fixes", under "File Picker Dialogs:": Please move the entry
Under "Notable Fixes", under "Desk Accessories:": Please move the entries
"* Desk Accessories:
"* Desk Accessories:
Please move the entry
Under "Notable Fixes", under "Hardware/Emulator Specific:": "* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
"* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
"* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
"* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
Under "Notable Fixes": "A full list of fixes in 1.2 can be found at: https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/issues?q=is%3Aissue+is%3Aclosed+milestone%3A1.2" should instead be |
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Additional a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes: Under "Notable Fixes": "* Fix inconsistencies around maximum number of icons allowed. (#529, #537, and more)" should instead be |
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Corrections for Additional a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes: Under "Notable Fixes": "* Fix inconsistencies around maximum number of icons allowed. (#529, #537, and more)" should instead be "* Fix inconsistencies around maximum number of icons allowed. (#528, #529, #537, #539)" because issue #528 and issue #539 also relate to this entry, because there are no other issues relating to inconsistencies around the maximum number of icons allowed and in order to match the style of all of the other entries in the release notes. |
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I think I captured most of the above, except for adding additional issue numbers to lists. In most cases, the issue numbers omitted are intentional, because they describe issues not present in 1.1. For example, if a change was made from 1.1 to 1.2 that resulted in a new bug in 1.2, the new bug should not be listed in the release notes. Also, completeness is not necessary; the full history of the issue tracker is available for anyone that is truly interested. |
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Thanks especially for noticing where I'd lost track of the difference between the Enhancements and Notable Fixes section. |
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a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes, part 1: Under "General Enhancements": "* Mouse Keys mode simplified: (#185)
"* Mouse Keys mode simplified: (#185)
I am dividing the a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes into multiple parts because some of my proposed changes involve backticks (`s) which might mess up the appearance of my other proposed a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes string changes. |
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/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes, part 2: Under "DeskTop Enhancements", under "File Picker Dialogs:": "* Pressing Apple+Tab (or Shift+Tab, when detectable), or holding Apple (or Shift, when detectable) while clicking Change Drive reverses the order. (#598, #605)" should instead be I am dividing the a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes into multiple parts because some of my proposed changes involve backticks (`s) which might mess up the appearance of my other proposed a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes string changes. |
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a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes, part 3: Under "DeskTop Enhancements", under "Keyboard-related changes:": "* Tab or ` changes selected icon in alphabetical order; Shuft+` (or Shift+Tab, when detectable) changes selected icon in reverse. (#275, #671)" should instead be I am dividing the a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes into multiple parts because some of my proposed changes involve backticks (`s) which might mess up the appearance of my other proposed a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes string changes. |
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a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes, part 4: Under "Additional Desk Accessories", under "Screen Savers": "* Screen Savers
"* Screen Savers
I am dividing the a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes into multiple parts because some of my proposed changes involve backticks (`s) which might mess up the appearance of my other proposed a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes string changes. |
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a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes, part 5: Under "Notable Fixes", under "Hardware/Emulator Specific:" "* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
"* Hardware/Emulator Specific:
I am dividing the a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes, located at https://github.com/a2stuff/a2d/blob/main/RELEASE-NOTES.md, string changes into multiple parts because some of my proposed changes involve backticks (`s) which might mess up the appearance of my other proposed a2d/RELEASE-NOTES.md release notes string changes. |
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Additional Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Desk Accessories": Under "Find Files":
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Further additional Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "General Keyboard Controls": Under "Dialog Boxes":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Getting Started": Under "Compatibility":
Under "Installation":
Under "An Apple II DeskTop installation has the following structure:":
Under "Using the DeskTop":
Under "Working With Disks":
Under "Working With Files": Under "Graphics — FOT/$08, PIC ($C1/$0000), PNT ($C0/$0001), files with ".A2FC", ".A2FM", ".A2LC", and ".A2HR" suffixes, and:": Under "To preview a Graphics file without leaving DeskTop, double-click the icon or use the File > Open command.":
Under "Previewing Files":
Under "Desk Accessories": |
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Using the DeskTop": Under "Working With Disks":
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Additional Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Using the DeskTop": Under "Working With Files": Under "Graphics — FOT/$08, PIC ($C1/$0000), PNT ($C0/$0001), files with ".A2FC", ".A2FM", ".A2LC", and ".A2HR" suffixes, and:": Under "To preview a Graphics file without leaving DeskTop, double-click the icon or use the File > Open command.":
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Further additional Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Getting Started": Under "Compatibility":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, string changes: Under "Using the DeskTop": Under "Working With Files": Under "Link files - LNK/$E1":
Under "Keyboard Shortcuts": Under "Windows":
Under "Icons":
Under "Menu Shortcuts": Under "File Menu":
Under "Desk Accessories": Under "Calendar":
Under "Find Files":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, screen saver screenshot changes: Under "Desk Accessories": Under "Screen Savers": Under "Screen Savers > Melt":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, control panel entry additions and control panel screenshot additions: Under "Desk Accessories": Under "Control Panels":
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Apple II DeskTop "History", located at https://www.a2desktop.com/history, desk accessory entry string changes: Under "History":
2025: New DAs: DOS 3.3 Import, Views |
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Apple II DeskTop "History", located at https://www.a2desktop.com/history, entry additions: Under "History": At the bottom of "2025":
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Apple II DeskTop "FAQ", located at https://www.a2desktop.com/faq, entry additions: Under "Is DeskTop available in other languages?": Under "Yes! Click the download link and you will find download packages available for the following languages:":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, desk accessory screenshot changes: Under "Desk Accessories": Under "About This Apple II":
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Apple II DeskTop "Docs" documentation, located at https://www.a2desktop.com/docs, Disk Copy screenshot changes: Under "Using Disk Copy":
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This is an issue for collecting problems noted in documentation, including:
Instead of filing a separate bug, please add comments here. Make the comments as short as possible.
I'll mark comments with 👍 if I believe I've made all of the updates.
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