more rewording

Author: rcurty

dataset.qmd

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 ## Streamed Movies & TV Shows Dataset
 
-Over the past decade, streaming services have rapidly transformed the way people consume entertainment, rising to dominate the media landscape. As more people turn to digital platforms for personalized viewing experiences, streaming services continue to redefine modern entertainment consumption. What was the last movie or show you have watched?
+Over the past decade, streaming services have rapidly transformed the way people consume entertainment, rising to dominate the media landscape. As more people turn to digital platforms for personalized viewing experiences, streaming services continue to redefine modern entertainment consumption. Are you into streaming? What was the most recent movie or TV show you watched?
 
 ![](images/streaming-services.png){width="370"}
 
 This workshop utilizes the **streaming-master-messy** comma-separated value (CSV) file which is derived from the movies and TV shows featured by major streaming services and distributed in Kaggle Project under a CC0 Public License[^1].
 
 [^1]: Henrique, D. (2020). *A simple movie & TV show recommendation system*. Kaggle. <https://www.kaggle.com/code/dgoenrique/a-simple-movie-tv-show-recommendation-system?select=credits.csv>
 
-We have merged six `titles.csv` files—each representing one of the streaming services featured in this project (Amazon Prime Video, Apple TV+, Disney+, HBO Max, Netflix, and Paramount)—into a single master spreadsheet.
+For this project, we have merged six `titles.csv` files—each representing one of the streaming services featured in this project (Amazon Prime Video, Apple TV+, Disney+, HBO Max, Netflix, and Paramount)—into a single master spreadsheet.
 
 The dataset contains 25,223 rows with movies and TV series titles along with the following variables as described in the data dictionary:
 
@@ -35,7 +35,6 @@ The dataset contains 25,223 rows with movies and TV series titles along with the
 -   tmdb_popularity: Votes on The Movie Database (TMDB).
 -   tmdb_score: Score on on The Movie Database TMDB.
 
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 ## Downloading the Dataset
 
 Now that we have a clearer understanding of the data we'll be working with, please take a moment to download and save the file to your working environment.