Update cran-comments.md

ref #345

Author: wibeasley

cran-comments.md

@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 Description
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-This submission includes new features and also addresses recent breaking tests from readr 2.0 (<https://github.com/OuhscBbmc/REDCapR/issues/343>).
+This submission includes new features and also addresses a few minor tests breaking from yesterday's readr 2.0 release (<https://github.com/OuhscBbmc/REDCapR/issues/343>).
 
-The [single existing CRAN daily note](https://cran.rstudio.com/web/checks/check_results_REDCapR.html) has been addressed (ie, 'LazyData' is specified without a 'data' directory).
+There is a [single existing CRAN daily note](https://cran.rstudio.com/web/checks/check_results_REDCapR.html); it has been addressed (ie, 'LazyData' is specified without a 'data' directory).
 
 Thank you for taking the time to review my submission, and please tell me if there's something else I should do for CRAN.  -Will Beasley
 
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@ Test environments
 
 1. Local Ubuntu, R 4.1.0 patched
 1. Local Win8, R 4.1.0 patched
+1. Local Win10, R 4.1.0 patched
 1. R-hub
     1. [Ubuntu Linux 20.04 LTS, R-release, GCC](https://builder.r-hub.io/status/REDCapR_1.0.0.tar.gz-d554cfab8fed4acba83ca159d2a14a7b)
     1. [Fedora Linux, R-devel, clang, gfortran](https://builder.r-hub.io/status/REDCapR_1.0.0.tar.gz-80a6d6b66bb84847b61d31f6029f5628)
@@ -23,7 +24,7 @@ R CMD check results
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 * No ERRORs or WARNINGs on any builds.
-  * One ignorable exception:  the win-builder and Windows Server R-hub builds don't yet have the newest version of readr.  I see they're using 1.4.0 and returns the error "Package required and available but unsuitable version: 'readr'".  But it runs well on my two local Windows machines.
+  * One ignorable exception:  the win-builder and Windows Server R-hub builds don't yet have the newest version of readr.  I see they're using readr 1.4.0 and returns the error "Package required and available but unsuitable version: 'readr'".  But it runs well on my two local Windows machines.
   * A second ignorable exception: R-hub refers to Bioconductor, which REDCapR doesn't use: "Error : Bioconductor does not yet build and check packages for R version 4.2;"
 
 * A NOTE is returned for the Zenodo.org URL being possibly invalid.  It resolves in a browser, but is takes a while; I'm guessing their website's slow today.