Two changes from #29360

Author: Keno

doc/src/manual/environment-variables.md

@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ determined by evaluating `ENV["JULIA_EDITOR"]`.
 
 The environment variables that Julia uses generally start with `JULIA`. If
 [`InteractiveUtils.versioninfo`](@ref) is called with the keyword `verbose=true`, then the
-output will list defined environment variables relevant for Julia, including
-those for which `JULIA` appears in the name.
+output will list any defined environment variables relevant for Julia,
+including those which include `JULIA` in their names.
 
 !!! note
 
@@ -148,10 +148,10 @@ $(DEPOT_PATH[1])/logs/repl_history.jl
 
 ### `JULIA_PKGRESOLVE_ACCURACY`
 
-A positive `Int` that determines how much time the max-sum subroutine
-`MaxSum.maxsum()` of the package dependency resolver
-will devote to attempting satisfying constraints before giving up: this value is
-by default `1`, and larger values correspond to larger amounts of time.
+A positive `Int` that determines how much time the package dependency resolver's max-sum
+subroutine `MaxSum.maxsum()` will devote to attempting to satisfy constraints before giving
+up. This value's default is `1`, with higher values corresponding to longer amounts of
+time.
 
 Suppose the value of `$JULIA_PKGRESOLVE_ACCURACY` is `n`. Then