diff --git a/src/main/resources/assets/spectrum/patchouli_books/guidebook/en_us/entries/brewing/lightweight_density.json b/src/main/resources/assets/spectrum/patchouli_books/guidebook/en_us/entries/brewing/lightweight_density.json
index e59036615e..70b3fd99d0 100644
--- a/src/main/resources/assets/spectrum/patchouli_books/guidebook/en_us/entries/brewing/lightweight_density.json
+++ b/src/main/resources/assets/spectrum/patchouli_books/guidebook/en_us/entries/brewing/lightweight_density.json
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@
     {
       "type": "spectrum:status_effect",
       "status_effect_id": "spectrum:lightweight",
-      "text": "$(thing)Makes you a bit lighter$() with every level. You noticed being able to jump a bit further and you fell slower.$(br)High levels will make you not take $(thing)Fall Damage$() anymore."
+      "text": "$(thing)Makes you a bit lighter$() with every level, allowing you to jump a bit further and fall slower.$(br)High levels will make you not take $(thing)Fall Damage$() anymore."
     },
     {
       "type": "spectrum:status_effect",
       "status_effect_id": "spectrum:density",
-      "text": "$(thing)Makes you heavier$() with every level, preventing you to make long jumps and take increased fall damage."
+      "text": "$(thing)Makes you heavier$() with every level, making you take increased fall damage and preventing you from making long jumps."
     }
   ]
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}