Translation corrections. (#214)

Various translation corrections.

Author: Tymaeus

Update/tara_altend.txt

@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ void main()
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("<color=#a59da9>大石</color>", NULL, "<color=#a59da9>Ooishi</color>", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 11, "ps3/s20/11/440700326", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「しかし、その意図がわからない。でもあなたなら、これに込められたメッセージがわかるはずだ！",
-			NULL, "\"However, I don't understand why. But you might be able to understand the message behind this!", Line_WaitForInput);
+			NULL, "\"However, I don't understand why. But you should be able to understand the message behind this!", Line_WaitForInput);
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 11, "ps3/s20/11/440700327", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　いつも一緒に遊んでいた、友達のあなたなら！」",
 			NULL, " You were her friend. You were always playing together!\"", Line_Normal);
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ void main()
 //rそれを反射的に振り払おうとした大石だったが、赤坂の制止を受けて我に返り、……力なく、肩を落とした。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "それを反射的に振り払おうとした大石だったが、赤坂の制止を受けて我に返り、……力なく、肩を落とした。",
-			NULL, "Ooishi instinctively tried to shake the nurse off, but he returned to himself after Akasaka stepped in... and then all the strength in his shoulders receded.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "Ooishi instinctively tried to shake the nurse off, but he came back to his senses after Akasaka stepped in... and then his shoulders flopped.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //看護師rvS20/00/nurseA44004.「大丈夫ですか、園崎さんっ？　……もう、いい加減にしてください！kvS20/00/nurseA44005.　今日はもうお引取り願えますかっ！！」
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ void main()
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("<color=#797d8a>赤坂</color>", NULL, "<color=#797d8a>Akasaka</color>", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 13, "ps3/s20/13/441300063", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「看護師さん、……この人は、雛見沢で大勢の人を亡くしています。そのあたりの事情を、どうかご理解ください。",
-			NULL, "\"Nurse... this man has lost an incredible number of people in Hinamizawa. Please, try to understand the circumstances behind that.", Line_WaitForInput);
+			NULL, "\"Nurse... this man has lost an incredible number of people in Hinamizawa. Please, try to understand how he feels.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 13, "ps3/s20/13/441300064", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "……お願いします」",
 			NULL, " ...I beg of you.\"", Line_Normal);
@@ -335,13 +335,13 @@ void main()
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("<color=#5ec69a>魅音</color>", NULL, "<color=#5ec69a>Mion</color>", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 3, "ps3/s20/03/440300203", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「レナ……あんた、命をかけて伝えてくれたんだね……？　受け取ったから……私、確かにあんたのメッセージ、受け取ったから……！！」",
-			NULL, "\"Rena... you gave your life to send this message...? I received it... Yes, I absolutely did receive it...!!\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"Rena... you gave your life to send this message, didn't you...? I received it... Yes, I absolutely did receive it...!!\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //r魅音はいとおしそうに、ビニール袋に封じられた帽子を胸に抱きしめる。そして、その薄汚れた染みが血痕であることを知って、もはや枯れたと思っていた涙をこぼした……。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "魅音はいとおしそうに、ビニール袋に封じられた帽子を胸に抱きしめる。そして、その薄汚れた染みが血痕であることを知って、もはや枯れたと思っていた涙をこぼした……。",
-			NULL, "Mion held the hat in the plastic bag to her chest and tightly embraced it. And then, knowing the filthy stain on the hat was a bloodstain, she began spilling tears while thinking of her friend...", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "Mion held the hat in the plastic bag to her chest and tightly embraced it. And then, knowing the filthy stain on the hat was a bloodstain, she began spilling tears long thought lost to her...", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 	DrawScene( "black", 1000 );